Then I read my some verse from my buddy Niilo and realized how awesome haiku is. It's totally short and simple, but if done right ... Anyway, I like Niilo's haiku (it's the same pluralized). It reminds me of what I've read from Leonard Cohen. And I mean that as a sincere compliment.
My favorite:
46
sitting on the deck
if you can call it a deck
you can’t, really, though
35
a new year in the old town
so many friends are missing
win some, you lose some
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